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William T. Spears ([personal profile] death_glare) wrote in [community profile] thedispatch 2019-09-25 06:40 am (UTC)

[ With her attention on him, he leaves them to hover there in the brightened sky, his wings beating in a slow and steady rhythm. ]

I would have thought you'd prefer it this way. It's far more dramatic, even more romantic.

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