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Grell Sutcliffe · · ☆ ([personal profile] untodeath) wrote in [community profile] thedispatch 2019-10-07 07:46 pm (UTC)

[ Eyes warming, she reaches out to take his hand, so that they she may eagerly tug him along. ]

Mn, the subject matter, the language, the execution - but it's also fairly unique to his other works. It fails to connect the speaker to the words personally, though conveyed as through experience. It adds a deeper sense of defensiveness, shame-- brilliant complexity!

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