[ First taking the iron from her to set safely aside, William then takes a good grip on her chin to turn her towards him. There's a contemplative look on his face before he decides to run his fingers through a few of the ringlets, hoping it won't undo all the work they've put in. What results is looser curls as the tightly wound ones are thinned between the movements of his fingers. After fussing with a few of them on one, he turns Grell back towards the mirror. ]
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I think that looks a bit more natural.